I quite liked the humour of this and I think it's too good too be turd lol
however it needs something more maybe animation?
haha I'm a comedy genius
seriously that was really funny but I geussed it imidiately due to the title mispell the age 13 rating and the very long intro
well the animator was the one that submitted the piece and seeming he thought it was only about a hen with a tie why have an adult writing. All the fault of the editor im afraid :P
I can't dance or animate like that so I think this should come with a warning you know like in the power rangers "this dancing was done by a rubbishly paid professional please do not try this at someone else's home"
sound advice. wish i'd thought to include that
I love it
I seriously was not expecting that ending. it was very funny good animation good use of sound
so that was your first flash?
I can only dream of being able to animate and draw like that even after 1-2 years of flash keep going and try making a full on movie
If you finish this you get the extra star
If you don't I'm gunna use my power to make you
this flash is amazing great graphics superb animation
it doesn't even need a storyline
A friend of mine could use your power of making people finish things.
He's probably got 20 projects and he's never finished any...
it was... ok
what on earth did he do to the rabit before he threw him
animation was fairly good however graphics need improving
a better storyline would be helpful
It was hard to make out but he was hugging him... thanks for the advice anyway!
it wasn't bad it just wasn't good either
like you said you suck at voices try getting someone else to do them
also a better quality mic would also help your movie
next time a better storyline could be added
characters need to be redesigned slightly
some of the animation was bad e.g the swings
and when people ask me to vote 5 it makes me more likely to vote 0
it wasn't bad it just wasn't good
i will never ask for a 5 again and i willl to pay my friend to do the voices, and i know the mic i want to buy and i will spend more time on the story and not make it up as i go along
ok heres one complaint it was tpp good you did such a great intro you sould use it in a seris
how what where dude you are one of the best flash artists I have ever seen the graphics and animation were unbelieveible two things though finish it and give it a backgroung like the other guy said anyway you rock
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